tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3847853199860290136.post1464555289230769771..comments2024-02-15T00:03:36.206+08:00Comments on The Tempremental: 4/25/2017Ciana Carrie http://www.blogger.com/profile/05868727943207473658noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3847853199860290136.post-12990696728859480002017-05-05T18:31:30.864+08:002017-05-05T18:31:30.864+08:00'Life's a windy road' - That's wha...'Life's a windy road' - That's what I realised in my transition from college to university, though. <br /><br />I agree when you say that 'there will be the times you just know something will happen based on instincts and that voice inside your head.' - I absolutely believe in that phrase. It helps me to grasp the positive or negative consequence of something. =) Ciana Carrie https://www.blogger.com/profile/05868727943207473658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3847853199860290136.post-90168619898711022972017-04-30T20:37:28.626+08:002017-04-30T20:37:28.626+08:00'life's a windy road' You couldn't...'life's a windy road' You couldn't have said it better. Things will get worse or better when you least expect it, but then there will be the times you just know something will happen based on instincts and that voice inside your head.<br /><br />Haha, I love observing body language, whether I am just sitting and watching strangers or watching my friends eat or talk XDMabel Kwonghttp://mabelkwong.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3847853199860290136.post-81607043934272622792017-04-30T00:35:36.403+08:002017-04-30T00:35:36.403+08:00Thanks, Mabel! It was written a long time ago - I ...Thanks, Mabel! It was written a long time ago - I didn't know I had this until I stumbled upon it on my Mom's laptop one fine day. Oh, that's because I exercised self-control and didn't splurge in graphic details about the murder (or come to think of it, maybe I should in its sequel =P ). <br />"You do have a creative writing edge to you, and I thought this piece read so well as a fictional narrative." - Aw, thanks once again! I really appreciate it! =)<br /><br />I've always believed in that phrase - be it for love, academics, or luck - because life's a windy road that's full of challenges that's there to either teach us a lesson or give us an opportunity to improve ourselves. I'm also an introvert and like you, I'd rather watch and observe people's conduct with a bag of popcorns. XD Idk why, but you tend to learn a lot about people by watching their body language and interaction with others... <br />Ciana Carrie https://www.blogger.com/profile/05868727943207473658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3847853199860290136.post-78582614647704672502017-04-30T00:31:09.831+08:002017-04-30T00:31:09.831+08:00Well.... I might add a sequel to this, if I've...Well.... I might add a sequel to this, if I've the time after the exams. *winks* Ciana Carrie https://www.blogger.com/profile/05868727943207473658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3847853199860290136.post-70629961832935834312017-04-29T22:27:27.761+08:002017-04-29T22:27:27.761+08:00Love how you structured the story, sad moment firs...Love how you structured the story, sad moment first, then happier, then sad - it has a great flow and seamless transition to the backstory. Was not expecting the doctor to have met such a gruesome end...and I am reading this past midnight :P<br /><br />You do have a creative writing edge to you, and I thought this piece read so well as a fictional narrative. <br /><br />That first line caught my attention and reminded me of a conversation with a colleague a while ago. My colleague and I were discussing the topic of love, and I said I believed in 'If it's meant to be, it's meant to be'. My colleague said he did not believe in this and reckoned these kinds of phrases puts an end to conversations.<br /><br />I really disagree, and do believe that in that phrase. I'm not religious, but I do feel we can all feel certain patterns in this world - like how sometimes you can predict how a friend will react, how a relationship will just not work, better times around a dark time, and so on. <br /><br />As an introvert, I don't mind waiting and staying in the background. Watching and observing from a far is also something I like to do, so I think that's also why I believe in that phrase too :)Mabel Kwonghttp://mabelkwong.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3847853199860290136.post-4884464264614976322017-04-26T05:48:22.909+08:002017-04-26T05:48:22.909+08:00Ahhh!! Don't leave me hanging! :-)Ahhh!! Don't leave me hanging! :-)The Yum Listhttp://theyumlist.netnoreply@blogger.com