Saturday, March 22, 2014

Torn Soul

It hurts when you don't look back,
Not even to say Goodbye.
The raindrops are piercing my heart.
I can feel its sharp blade
Slicing the core of my soul,
Dripping blood around the scene.
Is that rain clouding my vision?
Are those tears blinding me?

Like a candle in the dark,
That is who you are.
Your entrance brings nothing but radiance.
Smiles, it paints on our faces.
Your departure burned all traces of life.
We walk with a slouched back;
The grins curved downwards.
A lifeless being that we now are,
We are dead in our hearts


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    1. I'm hoping for that too, Jenn. It's been one hell of an emotional ride lately and it doesn't help that I am being submerged in assignments again...

  2. Wow. You really do have a talent with words. I hope your day brightens.

    1. Thanks for the compliment, YL. =) I think my talent improved after I took a writing subject last semester....

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    1. Well, Kylie, I was emotionally down when I pen the above passage. That's why it kind of showed, but I am much better now. ^_^

  4. I like the dark poetry, it sounds quite lyrical, and the title is very befitting.

    Take care.

    1. Thanks, Huai Bin. =) I never considered it as a dark poetry, though. To me, it's an outlet to vent my frustrations at anything, but using imagery and descriptive words instead.

      I shall; take care too...


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